The Beach
On
hot summer morning, my mum, brother and I went to the beach. It took
us about 20 minutes to get to the beach. When we arrived my brother
grabbed his toys. When my brother got to the sand him and my mum had a
sand castle competition. When they finished I had to judge. I picked
my little brother because his was bigger than hers. After that my mum
was as hot as it was like she was near the sun. So she went for a
little swim. When my mum went for a swim a few seconds later I went to
sleep.
When my mum got back she woke me up and said “
Siua where is your brother.” I said “
He
was still building his sand castle.” When I looked around I did not
see him. There were too many people. My mum and I splited up she went
left and I went right. When I was walking I saw some of my friends. The
first person I saw was Tane. He was eating ice cream. Then I saw
Angeling. She was tanning. I asked her if she had seen my brother.
She said “
YES YES.” he went that way. When I saw him I said “
Come here you have to go to mum.” he came to my mum. My mum said”
where were you.” My brother said”
I was getting some things to decorate my sandcastle.
When
we got home my mum told him to make her some toast for running off like
that. When he finished making my mums toast he went to his room and
went sleep. I had fun at the beach.
